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Post by Dustin <3 Ami October 24th 2012, 10:16 pm

Now this is a poem I wrote and when I was in the 10th grade through 12th grade I was depressed. I'm still depressed but not like those years. I cut myself a lot and it felt good. I was a wreak just wreak. Now I have seen a docter and it's a little better, no more cutting at least. But I still have the knife I used with me. Anyway I hope you enjoy this, your Ferro.


I cut I slice I dice I bleed
I let my blade take the lead

I don't want to live
I have nothing left to give

My heart and soul are dead
Because of something they said

I take a breath and cut some more
Watch my blood hit the floor

I feel so weak
As the tears stream down my cheeks

I take my last breath and I reach for you
But I realize your not there
It's okay I'm used to it
Because no one really ever cared
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Post by Prince Van October 24th 2012, 10:37 pm

It's sad to hear about that Ferro. Also, nonetheless, a very good poem, you are truly the king of poems.
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Post by BreeZaps October 25th 2012, 4:26 pm

Wow... im sorry to here that *hugs* Nice poem ^^
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Post by Dustin <3 Ami October 25th 2012, 6:29 pm

*hugs back* Thanks Bree
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Post by TinyJeshire October 27th 2012, 8:59 am

Nice Poem as always! Great job
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