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Post by Dustin <3 Ami December 4th 2012, 9:43 am

Rain, rain, go away,
Because of you the pain will stay.
Slit my throat, cut out my heart,
Leave me here, tear it apart.

Poison tears stream down my face,
My heart beats at a steady pace
As I try to stand again;
Alone and standing in the rain.

I don’t need you anymore …
Is what I think while tears pour.
I hate you like I hate my life;
But love is what cuts like a knife.

Love is death and death is you;
Its pain stains like a black tattoo.
Those memories come back again
And bind me in the ropes of pain.

Crimson blood streams down my head
Like a long, silk ribbon, tied by a thread,
To a platinum bullet, a hole in my skull…

... Now just a memory that’s faded and dull.



Rate please ^w^
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Post by TinyJeshire December 4th 2012, 8:36 pm

9/10. Great!~ I'm giving my honest opinion!~
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Post by Prince Van December 6th 2012, 2:52 am

11/10 I loved reading it ^_^
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Post by BreeZaps December 9th 2012, 3:14 am

Well done ^-^
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