This dark cold night.

I just got banned from the SS forums. Here is my poem (it doesn't really rhyme)


I watch as the gate to the doors lock on me.
I start to cry and think "Why?" "Why did I do this?" "I know better."
I slowly get off my feet. And walk away. And start to cry.
On this dark cold night.
I start to walk to my forum home. Crying my eyes out.
I get there and see a friend. I hug him and slowly walk away with him.
On this dark cold night.

(This is bad xP My first poem)

its not bad XD i would have done worse -.- But for ur first its pretty good keep it ups

That's a really nice poem Bree, and like AF said it's pretty well done for a first poem.

Sorry to hear about the event, and I hope things get better for you in that aspect.

good for your first poem. i liked it. you should write more

It was a nice poem.

So sad :'(
But it is all over Bree :3