The Revenge of Darkari

This is my first fanfiction so enjoy! The afterstory will now begin.

It was dark and stormy.......lighting was close

A small blue mudkip was sitting with his partner a cute little yellow mouse named Pikachu in their rescue base.
Mudkip: Hey Pikachu?
Pikachu:Yes Mudkip?
Mudkip: Ever since we stop Darkari from putting the world into a nightmare its pretty nice here now.
Pikachu: Yeah....i must admit.....it is pretty boring now
Mudkip: Do you think Darkari will ever gain his memory and hunt us down?
Pikachu: No way! Paklia hurt him really badly remember?
Mudkip: *sigh* yeah I remember....he was the one who turned me into a human.
Suddenly lighting flashed everywhere.
Pikachu: Wow this lighting is scary!
Mudkip: Dont worry Pikachu we are safe in here.
*Pikachu snuggles next to Mudkip*
Pikachu: Lets get some sleep.
*Pikachu falls asleep*
Mudkip: Yeah lets get some.......what the!!!!!
A small dark void appears. A shadow comes out.
?:Finally I found you!
Mudkip: IT CANT BE!!!
?: DARK VOID!
Mudkip: Gahhhhhhhhh!
Mudkip gets stuck in the void. Pikachu wakes up.
Pikachu:*yawn* whats the matter Mud..........oh no!
The void holding disappers and Mudkip smashes into the ground.
Pikachu: MUDKIP!
The shadow looks at Pikachu.
?: DARK VOID!
Pikachu: ARGHHHHHH!
Pikachu falls next to Mudkip both knocked out.
?: Yes my plan is now in gear. Now to get rid of these pest forever!
?: I Darkari will now rule the World!

End of part 1.

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Darkari's Revenge Part 2

When we last left our heroes Mudkip and Pikachu had a terrifying visit from Darkari! Now
unconscious what will happen to our heroes? Find out!


Mudkip:....gah...what happened? Where are we? Why are tied up!?
Pikachu: A shadow did it to us...before I fainted I saw it take us here..and when I got a better look of it....it looked like......Darkari.
Mudkip: No way! But it makes sense.....because how could we get here?
Mudkip looks around. Darkness was everywhere and he couldnt see a thing.
Mudkip: Pikachu can you light up your cheeks for some light?
Pikachu: Were to closely tied up...you would get zapped and im too weak to do, it anyway..
Suddenly they saw something red coming. Stomping louder with each step.
Pikachu: Gulp......Who is it?!
No words came from the creature
Mudkip: Tell us who you are! You dont scare me!
The creature stops.
Pikachu:?
Something green is coming down from the ceiling
Mudkip: Look Out!
Too late the green hand grabbed Pikachu and Mudkip.
Mudkip: Water Gun!
The powerful blast hits the creature and the hand drops them. They hit so hard on the ground that the ropes snap.

Creature: WHY YOU LITTLE PEST EAT THIS!
BAM!!!
Mudkip slams into a wall.
Mudkip: ahhhhhhhhh!
Creature looks at Pikachu with his red eyes. Your turn.
Ferreohorn! Stop! Oh ill feed you to the volcano! A voice says
Ferreohorn: Ye......Yes Master Darkari....
Darkari: This is no way to treat our......guests. Give them some light.
Ferrohorn lights up his body.
Pikachu: What is this place....a cave?
Darkari: No not just any cave..... A beedril cave.
Darkari uses shadow ball and it goes deeper in the cave.
Buzzing sounds can be heard and starts to get louder.
Darkari: lets go Ferrohorn
Ferrohorn: Yes master....*ferrohorn looks at mudkip* we will meet again.....if you survive.
Darkari and Ferrohorn disappears.
The buzzing sound gets louder.
Pikachu: Mudkip we have to get out of here!
Mudkip:...............
Pikachu: Mudkip? Mudkip!
Eyes appear...the buzzing gets super loud.
Pikachu: Oh no...their here.

End of part Two

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Darkari's Revenge Part 3

When we last left our heroes.......Darkari has woken beedrill and they are after Pikachu
and Mudkip! Will they escape? Find Out!

Pikachu: Mudkip! Mudkip! Wake Up!
Beedrill: ATTACK!!!!!!!!!!!!! PIN MISSLE!
Pikachu: I wont let you hurt Mudkip!
The Pin Missles head straight for Pikachu. Pikachu closes his eyes.
SWIFT!
The star shaped attack hits all the beedrill. The beedrill hit the ground.
Pikachu: Wha.......who are you?
?: No time! Run!
Pikachu: But I cant see!
?: Tail Glow!
The pokemon tail starts glowing. In that small opening now!
The beedrill start to get up again.
?: Hurry ill hold them off!
Pikachu: Right. *pikachu puts mudkip on her back and runs for the small opening*
Beedrill: Oh no you dont! Pin missle!
Beedrill throws a pin missle right at Pikachu leg. It sinks in.
Pikachu: Owwwwwwww*pikachu falls to the ground right next to opening*
?:Attract! Hearts go around the beedrill and it falls in love.
Beedrill: How may we help you? Says the beedrill in a love trance
?: leave here!
Beedrill: Yes right away! All the beedrills leave the cave.
?: Are you ok? *sees the needle in Pikachu's leg. We must get inside now before my attract wears off!
Pikachu: Im trying!(I dont see you with a needle the size of my head in your leg and a Mudkip on your back)
With a struggle they make it into the small opening in the cave. It was very small and damp.
Pikachu: Why are we here? And who are you?
In the light skitty is a small pink cat with yellow on her tail.
Skitty: Im Skitty. Ill explain why we are here later.
Pikachu: Thanks for helping us but Darkari will hunt us down....
Skitty: You too? Darkari wants me too!
Pikachu: But why whould he want you? Your just a little girl!
Skitty smacks Pikachu across his face.
Skitty: This little girl saved your life! Anyways he wants me because im really.....a human.
Pikachu: *wipes his face* Really?! Mudkip is really a human too!
Skitty: Well that would explain it......*looks at mudkip who is still knocked out*
Pikachu: What?
Skitty: Darkari wants all humans elimated......I stopped him with my parnter and pervented him from taking over my world.
Pikachu: We did too! But we thought he was gone forever....
Skitty: Well he's not.....i barely escaped him....he thinks im dead.
Pikachu: owwwww my leg still hurts.
Skitty: whats important now is to get that out of your leg.
Skitty pushes a rock then a small entrance appears.
Skitty: Down here I can give the stuff you need
Pikachu: Ok
They go down the entrance together.

Meanwhile......
Beedrill:Master Darkari........Pikachu and Mudkip escaped.....but there was another....i believe it was Skitty.
Darkari: I thought I got rid of her.....no matter. Mudkip is still out cold due to ferrohorn power whip.
Darkari: Send a scout to keep a eye on those three. Joltik!
Joltik was a tiny yellow spider as big as a penny.
Darkari: Go to the cave and keep close watch.
Joltik: Yes my master.
Darkari: My plan will soon be done and finally they cant stop me!

End of part 3

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